Wednesday, March 4, 2009

Threesome: You, Me, and the Universe

I have a new story up at Clean Sheets! "Tapping into Theresa" explores the place where the instant and the infinite converge. (Hint: In this story, it's a place where thighs also converge.)

It was never Theresa's goal to convert me by fucking me, to hump my dry-bone atheism into a more lubricious, spiritual form of atheism ...

Thanks, Clean Sheets!

17 comments:

Donna said...

I can relate to this story in so many ways--you didn't warn me it was wine porn, too! Scrumptious and intoxicating!

Neve Black said...

Gorgeous, J, just beautiful. Of course, your writing is uber-smutty and very hot, but you're also a pro when it comes to telling us about the deep, sensitive, caring and respectful tenderness your characters share too. I love that!

Ahhh...I'm getting teary-eyed. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Heidi Champa said...

Congrats Jeremy. It is an amazing story. So expressive and wonderful. I agree with Donna, intoxicating!!

Erobintica said...

I read this last night - just happened over there - and was thinking - that's funny, Jeremy hadn't said anything about a new story.

Loved this -

I wanted her to know. "I feel something," I told her, breathing hard.

"I should fucking hope so!" she replied from the edge of her bliss, breakbeating our rhythm with laughter.


I had to keep going back to those lines, chuckling. Great!

Craig Sorensen said...

Congrats, Jeremy.

I look forward to digging in!

Marina said...

Wow, Jeremy, that was wonderful. You really do have an incredibly sexy mind!

Jeremy Edwards said...

You folks make me so very, very, very happy! Thank you for filling my universe with warmth and light.

EllaRegina said...

I was so happy to see it up! The story, I mean. ;-)

Congratulations!

Kirsten Monroe said...

Spamword: skingle -- your words make me spingle with delight....and drizzle rivulets of ecstasy!

Congrats Jeremy!

Jeremy Edwards said...

Thanks, ER and KM! I just got up—er, I mean woke up ... and your comments made me all nice and skingly!

Emerald said...

What a GORGEOUS story...I loved it so much I hardly know what to say. A beautiful description of exactly what I understand to be true about the Universe. While I loved the eroticism of it, the appreciation I felt of the description of the spiritual component really seared for me. And of course, I love the combination thereof. Thank you Jeremy.

kristina lloyd said...

Oh, what a wonderful story! I love the two different ways of seeing the same thing (though I realise that makes no proper sense).

I was reading though thinking, Ah, I'll quote that line back at him, it's great. My first was 'and let trust and acceptance fill in the gaps'.

Then I had to stop thinking that way because there were too many gems.

Craig Sorensen said...

Au contraire, Kristina, you make perfect sense.

I was distracted this morning, so I didn't read this story as I had planned, and I'm glad I waited. It's the kind of story one can get lost in!

Excellent!

Verification word: beling. As in a state of beling.

Nikki Magennis said...

Gorgeous story, Jeremy! Sorry I'm late - the universe distracted me there, but I just wanted to add my voice to the chorus.

I loved Theresa's character, and like KL says, so many great lines.

Jeremy Edwards said...

Wow—thanks, Emerald, Kristina, Craig, and Nikki!

We've been away from home this week, and it's been a very enjoyable time indeed ... but I can say without exaggeration that reading the heartwarming comments here has been a true highlight of the vacation week. : )

Kristina Wright said...

Lovely story, Jeremy. You blew me away with this one.

(And this is my third attempt to publish this comment, so I apologize if there are multiples.)

Jeremy Edwards said...

Thank you so much, KW! We've just returned from our travels, and you've prompted a new round of happy-dancing on our home turf.

And I'm sorry my blog forgot its manners and didn't let you in the first two times you knocked. Thanks for your persistence in the face of such blog boorishness!